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Red!, a retelling by Simon Brooks, art by Sergio 'Peerro' Lantadilla © 2011 It was dark and damp and hot. The air was filled with rancidity. The old woman felt around the slime covered walls which gave and moved to her touch. She felt a jolt and was bounced around and for a short while was not sure which way was up and which was down. Then all was still. Sitting up she felt the walls press against her. She heard gentle rumblings, was jolted again and felt it become slightly and slowly more damp. There was an acidic smell to the new dampness, not unlike wine. At least it was warm. Silence and stillness and what seemed like eternal darkness ruled for a while. Then the old lady could hear murmurings, mumbles, but could not really make anything out. The woman was glad to try to hear what the noise was; it was a distraction from the claustrophobia she was beginning to feel. Then another sudden jolt, a roar, and she was bounced and jostled around and felt something land and press against her. There was barely room to move before; now she was crushed almost beyond endurance against the stinking, slimy wall. The old woman did not move and then muttered to herself: "It's dark in here, but at least I am still alive." "Who's there?" said a tiny voice. "Is that you, Little Red?" "Grandma! Did the wolf eat you too?" "Well, I suppose he did, my little one." "I'm sorry Granny, it's all my fault." The small voice began to tremble, so Granny pulled her grandchild in close and hugged her. "Don't be silly. How can it be your fault?" "Well. Me and Mama, we made some bread for you 'cause you were poorly and I was supposed to bring it to you with the wine. And I was s'posed to come straight here, but I never did," said the girl. "It's so hot, I can barely breathe." Granny spoke softly. "There, there." There was a sudden movement and they heard the sound of liquid rushing towards them. It poured over them both, Red cried out and Granny held the girl tighter. There was that acidic smell again. In another place it might have smelled good. Maybe. Granny said, "Well, what happened?" She tried to clear the warm liquid from Red's face. "Mama told me to come straight here and not dally on the way, but I didn't," said Red. "Well, what happened?" Granny asked again. The girl sniffed and said, "I met a wolf on the path, Granny." "Well, what happened?" "He asked if he could walk with me as it was such a nice day and I said 'yes'. He was big, but really thin, Granny."
"There, there. What happened?" There was more noise and some moving, then nothing. "He asked where I was going and I told him. That I was coming to your house 'cause you was poorly and I had bread me and Mama made and some wine for you. The wolf, the wolf, he said maybe I should pick some flowers, too. That if you was poorly, flowers would make you happy and feel better." "Yes, they would, my dear. Yes they would. So you strayed off the path?" "I did Granny. I strayed off the path, and then he was gone. And I came straight here." Granny was quiet for a while. "That wolf, the old sinner. I bet he thought he'd come here and make a meal of us both." She sniffed the air and her clothes. "And wash us down with the wine, of course." She sighed and thought. "I'm sure there is a way out of this, if I could think of it," she said. "It smells in here, Granny." "That is does, dear. That it does. It's dark and hot too, in case you hadn't noticed." Although Red could not see her grandmother, she knew she was smiling. Red could hear it in her grandmother's voice. The humidity rose and rose. Granny tried to take deep breaths, but found it hard. The fetid air grew more and more heavy until there was a great rumbling roar and release. For a while Granny and Red could breathe a little easier. There was a slight movement and it felt like something was pushing in against one of the walls of the wolf's stomach. A shining point came through the wall and with it, a thin sliver of light. The sudden brightness grew as the slit grew. After the complete darkness, the light made Granny cover both her own eyes and those of Little Red. More light poured in and a pair of hands followed. Little Red was pulled from Grandma's grasp and lifted out of the belly of the beast. Granny cried out. The hands reached down again and carefully lifted Granny. They both blinked in the bright light and saw before them a tall, strong, kind-faced huntsman. Although he smiled at them, there was something about his face that told Granny how both she and her granddaughter looked and smelled. "Are you two ladies alright?" he asked, helping Grandma sit down in the rocking chair. He got a cloth, dampened it and handed it to Granny who wiped her face and hands clean and looked around. There was a basket on the floor, and flowers strewn all about. An empty bottle was lying on the floor next to an untouched loaf of bread still wrapped in a cloth. The table had been pushed across the floor and a chair was tipped over. The old lady stood still shaking a little, wetted the cloth once more and began to wipe off Red. The young girl clung to her grandmother looking between the huntsman and the wolf. The huntsman began to pick up things which had been knocked onto the floor and straighten the house up a little. He said: "I've been tracking this old sinner for a while now. Sorry I didn't find him sooner." Granny looked at the huntsman. He was young and handsome and made Granny's heart skip a beat and she smiled. "Thank you. For saving us and for picking up the mess." Granny looked over at her bed and saw the wolf with his head flopped back and belly opened up. "Please take it away," she said. The huntsman took the body outside and came back in. His clothes were rough but well made. The boots heavy and worn, but looked comfortable. She remembered that her husband, when he had been alive, had a pair just like it and he used to say they were as comfortable as slippers. She smiled at the memory, but then shuddered again, thinking of the wolf. The young man looked around the house and then at Granny. "Well, there is a reward for a wolf's pelt. It doesn't seem right to me that I keep it all. After all, I found the sinner in your house." He moved from one foot to another, slightly embarrassed. I'll bring you the money, or we could split it" said the man. "No need to do that." Granny stroked Red's hair with the wet cloth trying to get the rid of the smell. "If you had not been tracking him, I don't know when we would have got out. You keep the money." "If you say so. Thank you. Can I help out here? Should I send word to anyone?" "No. We will be fine now. If you could take the covers off the bed and burn them, I would appreciate that." "Of course." So, the house was put right again. The great pot was boiled and the water poured into a small tin tub. Granny washed Little Red, boiled the pot again and washed herself. She picked some lavender and rubbed the leaves over both of them. Red wore one of Granny's warm shirts while the washed clothes they had been wearing dried in the sun, the girl's hooded red cloak flapping in the warm breeze. Together they made some soup which went very nicely with the bread Red had brought. Before dusk, they went out together and picked some new flowers and put them in a vase. The flowers Red had arrived with were broken and trampled. Red's mother and father visited a couple of days later to check on them both. Word had got out that the wolf had been found and killed and Granny and Red were fine. Although it needs not to be mentioned, I will say that Little Red never strayed from the path again; unless it was with her grandmother to pick flowers.
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The Carver, an original tale by Simon Brooks There were once, as there always are in tales like these, a man and a woman who loved each other dearly. He made carvings out of wood she found for him in the forest. Sometimes she would bring home a limb blown down in a storm; a branch snapped by some animal off a fruit tree; a sun-bleached, water smoothed piece found in a stream. He was now blind but could work well with his hands and fingers, whittling, engraving the beautiful carvings by touch. And what did he carve? Well, the stories his wife would tell him of course. He would see the images she describe flash and dance through his mind, and would try to retell these tales in images of scenes, of characters in the form, almost, of a map, which he carved into the wood she brought him. Their house was small but was filled with books. There were books about herbs, there were books about music, there were books about paintings, there were books about magic, there were books about books even, but most of all there were books filled with stories. The house smelled like good cooking and books and what better smell is there than that? Their living room had four chairs in it. They formed a rough circle facing a fire place that sat in the centre of the house. Beyond the fireplace was the kitchen. The smells and warmth from the kitchen added to the smells and warmth of the living room, whose walls were covered with bookshelves. When he moved about the room, he would sometimes run his fingers over the spines of the books his wife would read and pull one off the shelf for her. Sometimes he would just sit with a book in his lap and feel the embossing on the leather cover and lift the book to his face to smell the pages, or run the paper between his fingertips. For years she read him the stories and told him the tales, and his knives and chisels would work the stories into the wood. To help make ends meet she would sometimes sell a carving or two. She would ask her husband which ones she should take to the market and he would run his hands over them and pick some out. He would hand the carved, bleached wood to her with a smile, and as she slowly took the pieces, his fingers would slide over the wood as if saying goodbye to his work. She would then replace the carvings by placing her own hands in his, and he would kiss her fingers gently, and smiling she would do the same to his rough hands. The only other money that they brought in was that which she made from making clothes, cleaning houses and the like. And what would he be doing? Carving. Carving the stories that were in his head, the stories his wife told him, the stories his wife read to him. Well, time passed and sometimes you die before your time and that is what happened with the man. Without the gentle sound of the knife as it slowly chiseled and formed stories in the wood, the house seemed filled with silence. The sound of his breathing and the chuckles and sighs, and gasps as she would read to him were no longer there. Without his presence and smile, the house did not seem as warm. And it seemed that a darkness came into her life. One day she woke to find a dog sitting outside their house. She tried to shoo the dog away but it would not leave. She chased the dog with a broom, but it came back and sat on the front step and looked at her. She left it there when she went to work. When she came back, the dog was still there waiting. The woman stood with her hands on her hips and looked at the dog. She scowled at it and went inside leaving the door open. Well, come on then, she said to the dog, and so in it came. She found some scraps and fed the dog and put an old bowl on the floor and filled it with water. The dog ate and drank, then sat down by her feet. And that is where the dog stayed never bothering her just watching and sitting close by. After a month or so, she found herself patting the dog, messing its ears up and scratching its head. A smile came to her face, the first smile since he had passed. And time passed, and she got used to the silence in the house. Then she began to read to the dog. The dog had no name; it was just dog. She would finish one story and begin another until she found she could not keep her eyes open. Then she would go up the creaking wooden stairs to bed. Sometimes the dog would follow and sit at the foot of the bed. The dog gave her some comfort there. Late one night there was a banging at her door. A cry for help came from outside. She went to the door to see if she could help but the dog pushed in front of her and growled low and menacing. Out of the way, dog. Someone needs help, she said. But the dog growled even more and barked at both her and at the door. The cries got more urgent and then stopped. The dog kept barking, growling with teeth bared, and then she heard some harsh whispers. No point in trying here, the dog will most likely tear us to pieces. The next morning she heard from her neighbours that two people had been murdered in their home and four other houses robbed. She had been lucky, they had told her. No, she said. I had dog. They had settled into winter. Nights were long and dark. She still read to dog; one story after another in the light of the lamp. But this night was different. When she finished one story, the dog got up and went to the door. She opened the door to let the dog out but he just turned and looked at her and waited. Well go on then, and do your business, she said. But the dog just looked at her and took a couple of steps and stopped. She stepped out through the door and dog trotted off and stopped again, waiting for her to follow, which she did. The dog then trotted to a small shed where they had kept some tools and old broken things. The dog scratched at the door until she opened it. The dog trotted in and took hold of a piece of cloth and pulled it off a trunk. It was a large box she did not recognize. She walked over to it and opened the chest. The lid was heavy and she struggled, but once it fell open she found a collection of her husbands carvings inside. She pulled out carving after carving, piece of wood, after carved piece of wood and found in these carvings the story of their life together. She saw her face in a piece of rose wood she remembered giving to her husband, many years ago, a young face, filled with joy. She saw her hands in his hands as they floated across a piece of drift wood. Images in wood of places they had been, things they had seen together, before he had lost his sight. She stared at them in wonder and smiled, a tear rolling down her face. Dog sat and looked at her. She took them, one by one, into their house and set them around on every space she could find for them. The sun came into her home and the carved, bleached wood would seem to amplify the sunlight coming in through the windows, adding warmth to the house. And the darkness slowly lifted as she looked at what had been their life together and the dog sat at her feet. With happy memories of her old life around her, she realized a new life was beginning.
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